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First readers, I changed my mind about not doing updates & corrections for the first 5 chapters. I realized I can't beta people who have already written and posted their fic without honoring my own advice.

By example I will revise my chapters as I go along. You might notice slight changes in the details. The general plot should stay the same. If you see anything too drastic let me know.

I still contend that other first time authors who leave their first few chapters the same, comck ack and demonstrate their growth in later chapters. The comparison as a reader (if we stick with them) shhow how much growth they have been able to achieve in the life of the story.

In the revised chapters, see if you notice the shorter sentences with shorter paragraphs and shorter posts (part 1-3 of a chapter especially if I haven't finished editing the entire chapter).

Second, I have posted chapter 6 today. Since it is my first fic and my first smut scene, I que questions about what works. I think the storyline has improved drastically with the outline I have.

If you see any errors or omissions, the plot doesn't work for you, the sexual acts don't appeal to you (or better yet, they do) or you have any other comments; you can pohem hem under this thread or send them to me in my ezboard inbox or email me at stargenna@yahoo.com.

If you can just catch mistakes you see and forward them, you will be a big help to me.

Third, I will post any bits I think a reader would want to know here in this review section.

I have just given my betas my first completed draft yet. I will make the revisions to what is posted as they come to me.

The research (so I can stay true to the characters and the DROM vision) has taken more time than I thought possible. But I think it is rewarding when I across an encyclopedia of Andromeda (like I did last Friday, hooray!). It is difficult to be completely consistent within the episode guides, but I will try to account for differences in plot.

Genna

Justin,

I definitely can promise that you will read graphic sexual depictions. That is why I came to adult fan fiction because I want to see how descriptive I can be. If I am entertaining to other people too, then I am well beyond where I started.

I can also promise that the two, Dylan and Rommie, will come together sexually. It just won't be in the way that traditional Dylan and Rommie fans see the pair.

I hope I can count on you to use this space to tell me whether it is working out for you or you have serious reservations about what I write for the two of them. Just please be specific about what you like and don't like as the story unfolds. :)

Genna

I am looking for Romance between Dylan and Rommie as well as graphic sex. As long as the two come together and stay together I am happy.

What are you looking for in a Dylan/Rommie relationship?

It is not going to show up immediately, but what did you have in mind?

Thanks for responding to my review and I eagerly await the Dylan/Rommie parts.

Hi Justin,

Thank you for taking the time to read my story. Dylan and Rommie will come together in later chapters.

This is my first fic. I started it over ff.net but when they changed their policy, I was just getting into the NC-17 parts of the story. I just abandoned it for about 8 months.

I will update by Friday, May 30th. I just obtaine fir first beta this past week. ;) I haven't worked with someone else on my writing either up to this point. It should make the chapters better.

I will check back for comments or reviews from time to time. So feel free to write what you REALLY think here. I will come back and respond if you would like.

Genna

I like the the other possible pairings. I hope to see Dylan/Rommie in this. But other than that I like Tyr and Beka.

I saw the last 5 chapters too late before I gave my first review. Please do continue to do parts for the other couples.