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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey!!!! this is the best jesse/brennan fic i've ever read. hats off on a job well done. one question though.....why does brennan always get to be the dominant one in all ur fics. i was kinda hopin' u would write a prequel to senseless....on how brennan seduced jesse.....keep up the good work
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If i could write sex like that.....
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great but sometimes i felt lost like who is talking or what is happening great story line though i like the plot
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cutest thing ever and i'm not even a slash fan. you're a very talented writer, this story was very nice. good job, definetly
~sam~
~i suppose you'll want me to review that SG1 fic now, huh...
~sam~
~i suppose you'll want me to review that SG1 fic now, huh...
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hang my head in shame.
~sam~
*Note: Mixing up authors is a side-effect of sleep depravation
~sam~
*Note: Mixing up authors is a side-effect of sleep depravation
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot and sweet, very enjoyable story. One complaint: "cos" and "bcos" are not words. Using netspeak in fiction makes an author seem juvenile and interrupts narrative flow. Your storytelling skills are too good to mar them like that.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love what I read, thank you! Jesse is my fav, among my fav elf...
It was full of tense in the end, and I thank you for that.
You did a perfect work with your fic.
Sivan
It was full of tense in the end, and I thank you for that.
You did a perfect work with your fic.
Sivan