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for Paper Machet

by berkobtch

person kristen
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update very soon! It's such a great story and I love the dominant Tristan!!!
person laura
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love dirty stories like this....um, some of your transitions are a lil confusing....part one, tristan's entrance for examplee, and i think you should have him embarass rory some more....tease his mary...make her beg...i'd love a naughty schoolgirl scene at chilton, heehee! ty 4 writing!
person Anonymous
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon!! plz continue!!!!
person Camilla
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I mean, please continue ! :P
Tristan taking charge was defintely him ;) Keep it going : )
person ~*~*~Jazz~*~*~
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love it when Tristan's naughty and commanding it's very sexy. Write more soon.
person meg
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update very soon!!