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for Be My Downfall

by samd

person tom222
schedule October 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

wow this was excellent, cant wait for the next chapter! Love the direction it is going in

person CJ
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a fantastic story. Please continue, you can't leave it there.

BTW, I also saw this story posted on fanfiction.net
I hope that it was you who posted it and not that someone stole your work. Just thought I should mention it.

Can't wait to read more of this.
schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Even with some of the minor typos, this story is really good. I hope you revisit it soon.
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing.... you really captured their personalities.

I love the Brian/Michael pairing... you did so great.
person Lee23
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I LOVE it! please do finish it! I can't wait to read more! You are an AWESOME writer!
person J.J.
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Desperately encouraging the continuation of this fanfic. I've actually re-read the ten chapters available. Couldn't really help myself I guess. It's just that damn good.
person J.J.
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eversince first watching QAF, my favorite show as of now, I smiled at the thought of Brian and Michael finally taking their friendship a bit further. And you made my greatest wish come true. I want to thank you, not only for this pairing but for truly adding to your fic the drama packed into the show as well. It seemed to me like this was an entire season in itself, and it would have been so much greater if this actually happened in the show. The storyline by far as intrigued me and I definitely acknowledge a great deal of time and effort was put into each chapter as your story unfolded. For this I admire your determination, as you've given me my first and best QAF fanfic. A mere thank you just won't do. The story is so captivating, I'm biting my nails trying to assume what is to come. You're writing style by far is perfection and this most certainly invokes my envy. You are so descriptive, the words I read converting to vivid imagery. This fic actually forced emotional responses from me, most tears as I read the encounters between Brian and Michael from the bathroom stall in Babylon, to their affection shared at the hospital. You definitely know how to make a heart skip a beat. Well, I really do hope you get around to getting the next chapter(s) up soon.. can't wait to continue reading. Hell, just might re-read what you've got so far just because it was so divine. Overall, you truly have brought to the show to life in writing. Again, thank you.
person Linsey Weiser
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet jesus tell me when the next chapter will be up please!!!!!!!!!!! I need more!!!!!!!!
person Shiroi
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I read my screen correctly, it said there was no reviews for this story. That's just a mistake. I wanted to leave a note and say how wonderful I think it is.

Honestly, I was weary of reading a QaF fanfic, but you made a wonderful story and kept them in character! I actually skipped a class because I just had to read all the way to ch. 10 in one go.

It's wonderful, and just what I was looking for after reading "Always Have, Always Will". ^.^