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for A Past Revealed

by charmedfanatic

person ashlee
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a long chapter, yay!!! chris's family is finally gonna know wat happened to chris! i can wait to see their reaction!! the first memory they are in should tie in with what you wrote in that last chapter:
*Maybe I should tell him, he seems really sincere, yea and he was really sincere when he led me into that alley. *
Leo leading chris into an alley.. hmm... thats just my idea~ cant wait to read more!
person ashlee
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!! that chapter was the BEST!!! LOVED it! the shower part in chris's dream was sooo sadd! i thought i was gonna cry! hmm.. who to be at the door... i say Leo~ cant wait to read more!
person Hailey
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! u r officially the best writer EVER! that last chapter was fantastic! aww, chris has a lil brother~ i have one question, how old are chris and ryan in this fic? poor chris, every demon!! that is brutal! will the adult ever find out wats goin on? i cant believe leo is evil in the future! are you gonna show him in one of chris's dreams? this chapter was so sad. chris talkin to his mom, thinkin his parents are gonna think bad of him if they find out... aww... who to be at the door... im gonn say Piper.. cant wait to read more!
person xfaytx
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im lovin this fic! and i LOVE how u update everyday! thats a big bonus! i think that l cha chapter was my favorite so far! i also love the fact that chris has a younger brother. i think its realli sweet. i k Lek Leo should be at toor.oor. it'll make the story more interestin i think... well, cant wait to see how everything turns out!
person kaytie
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! this story is realli great! that last chapter was so sad! poor chris! i cant wait to read more!! whose ryan? i guess ill find out in the next chapter!
person ashlee
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u wrote more! yay! loved the last chapter! ur such a good writer! im so glad ur updatin so fast so i dunt have to wait! thank you!! im so excited for the next chapter!
person Hailey
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE this story! u already got me hooked! the best part is ur gonna update so fast! im so glad u are cause i cant wait to read more of this! looking forward to more!
person ashlee
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thats a great start to ur story! i hope u write more soon!
person Moo
schedule April 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I read it on ForeverFandom earlier, it's awesome. Sexy and awesome. Lol. BRILLIANT ME DUCKIE!! ^.^