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im glad ur finally bak! great comebadck chapter too! i thought it was magnificent!! haha, new love interest for chris? loved that! i thought it was sooooo sweet of chris to still care about wyatt even after the torture he jus went through! and then havin all of wyatts demons rape him and he STILL cares about wyatt? wow, go chris! one thing im confused about is if wyatt loves his brother? either romantically or brotherly or even both? could this love have a role in the future? mabe some chris/wyatt? cant wait to read more and find out!! love this so much!! sequel too? YES!

hey! whay aren't u updatin!! its been forever! i've been waitin and waitin and waitin but still no update! i hope u do soon, cause im getti realli anxious!

Excellent story! Hope for more soon!

another great chapter! these mempry chapters are awesome!!! i like how ur gonna make it a patterna alternating with chris and ryan duyring present day and the memories~ poor chris, followin leo into that trap!! hmm.. the next memory should be of a torture session of chris!

doven ven have to ask, u know we all loved that chapter!!! it was fantastic!! i love how u mixed in a lil of both evil leo and evil wyatt! the endin was depressin though! i think the next memory should either be of wat happened to the other people in the family, like ryan and piper and everyone else~ and maybe a lil toture session added in

that chapter was better than i could of ever imagined it!!! i think im realli gonna enjoy the memory chapters!! i think the next chapter should b a lil conversation btwn evil wyatt and chris... a clip of wat knossos does to torture chris... wel, cant wait to read more!

It would be cool if the next memory had Bianca in it. So fars iss is a great story.

that chapter was 10 times better than i could've imagined it! i liked the bondin between chris and leo! nice twist in the endin.. awww, bortherly moment! hmm first memory shoud be of a moment between evil leo and chris... i LOhis his story!!! haha... cant wait to read more tomorrow!

awwww.. the endin with chris and ryan was sweet... cant wait to see the reaction of chris's family when they find out his past... ouch... hmmm... i say the first memory should be between chris and wyatt when he is turnin evil~ guess ill find out tomorrow!

that was perfect! just enough emotions and drama and the endin was nice, chris and ryan.. some bondin btwn the two~ awww... ne ways, back to ur question... i think i want the fiscenscene to be of why chris hates leo so much... maybe ties in with some of evil wyatt~ this next chapter is gonna b great, i already know!