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for A Past Revealed

by charmedfanatic

person xfaytx
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, u have realli out done urself!! this chapter was unbelievably amazing!! like seriously! all the emotion and drama was so well written! reading it brought tears to my eyes cause i just felt so bad for chris~ its likea one crisis after another! i hope he has a chance to reunite with trent!! im sooo lookin forward to more!
person kaytie
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i HAVE to give u an award for this chapter~ it was definately ur best! when trent tucked chris into bed and layed next to him, that was so sweet and romantic!!!! i loved every single word of this chapter till the very end !! i read it like 10 times because i couldnt get enough! please write more soon!
person foxhana
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you update too slow!!!! update quicker ne?! i can't wait to see what the sisters and leo will react. :D
person Kaytie
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes! u updated again! aww... the trent/chris moment was sweet! loved it! and i also loved the brotherly moment btwn chris and ryan!! loved it loved it! more please!
person xfaytx
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a great sex scene btwn chris and trent! im realli beginin to love that couple! they seem so great together!! ahh!! his family had to see that! ouch, thats gotta b embarrasin! haha, cant wait to see their reaction! wyatt and ryan... all i can say is 'awww!!!'.. especially the endin part of that section!! u said u would mention a rape scene btwn knossos and chris? i didn't read that part.. is it gonna b in the next chapter? cant wait to read more!!!
person ashlee
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic! u wrote the scene with chris and trent so well!! they are sucha cute couple!! im wonderin wat chris's family is sayin about that scene they jus witnessed.... haha, i know its gonna b great! u tricked us!! no chris/wyatt yet? and no rape scene with chris and knossos either!! well, i guu'llu'll put it in the next chapter, right? another question, is wyatt gonna rape chris? because i dunt think chris is gonna sleep with him willingly~ ahhh!! i cant wait for the next chapter now! so more please!
person hailey
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u tricked me! whre's wyatt and chris? hahaha, its ok because there was smut in it ne ways! that was such a sweet moment btwn chris and trent, their first time together!! and chris tellin ryan he loves him, im a sucker for brother moments!! n then in the next chapter there will b chris/wyatt! im curious to see how that will happen... eithertt wtt will put a spell on chris or just rape him... because it seems as though chris wouldn't do that seein how he has a boyfriend~ well, cant wait to find out! AND; whre was that rape scene in that chapter? becasue i didnt read about knossos in it!!
person ashlee
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!! i finllay!! i waited FOREVER for this chapter!!! yes, midterms are a bitch, so i guess i understand~ plus, that chapter was soooooo great that it more than makes up for the long update!! plus that was a realli realli realli long chapter! yay!! poor chris!! thats all i can say! bein totured like that and still lovin his brother! he is so sweet! and i also love the fact that its chris and trent instead of him and bianca~ more more more!
person kaytie
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yessss!!! u updated and it was FANTASTIC!!! loved it lved it loved it!! it was so great! that was so sad how chris was being tortured so horribly and his family had to sit there and watch!! atleast wyatt healed him, so he has to have SOME feelings for his little brother, right? but then again, he ENJOYS torturing him so... i love havin chris and this new trent gu7y together! i thinks its a wonderful decision!! cant wait for sequel!!
person xfaytx
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh! this chapter was long, thank u! i HATE midterms too, so i understand y it took u sog tog to update, but can u try to speed this one up a lil? thanks! that chapter was amazing! but no smut? i guess it will cooon, huh huh? i cant believe his family was forced to watch wyatt torture him! that must of been awful! i think this is one of my fav chapters so far! i dunt like bianca and chris together either, so im glad u added a new character (trent) smart mvoe! theres goin to b a sequel?! yippee! more soon please!