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for A Past Revealed

by charmedfanatic

person charlott
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good
person Ashley
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story. This is one of the best ones that i have read or written. Please continue. You are a truly gifted writer.
person PlotBunny
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I know who it is! I'll bet it's Trent! I'll bet ten thousand dollars that it's Trent! You are horrible, leaving it as a cliffie. You're fuckin' brilliant! Chris is the hottest thing I have ever seen, and the idea of him gettin' it on with another guy is sexy as hell. I love Chris and his waaaayy cute butt! Write more Chris stories!
person alienangel19852003
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story but you need to double space its hard to keep your place in the paragraphs
person Sweetheart
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg baby you are so good with your writting, I am and will always be your biggest fan. And I can't belive you won't tell me what will happen next. You and your "you'll find out when every one else does" that's crap I should be the first to know. lol Anywayz your really good at what you do, you put your heart into your and I'm proud of you. you better tell me what happoens next. lol I love you and keep writting. and oh god you made them hurt poor Chris ::cries:: lol
person heath
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT :) CAN'T WAIT FOR DEC FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEST STORY EVER MADE :) REALLY EXCITED TO READ YOUR SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
person xfaytx
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im gonna miss this fic... although i am happy that there will be a sequel!! the ending was SUCH a cliffy! but i loved every single word of it!! i got so sucked into the last chapter and u left me hanging!! im glad chris worked his way through his issues with his family... who is this mysterious guess???
person Hailey
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ur thanking me?? i should be thanking u for this wonderful story!! u did an excellent job on it! are u sure this was ur first??? i thought it was brilliant leaving it hanging like that so it could lead into the sequel! im thrilled to hear it will be coming so soon!
person ashlee
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
who is it?!?! its driving me crazy!!! i guess ill just have to wait~ i read this whole story over again as a sort of goodbye~ this has truly been a great fic! glad that u atleast tied some loose ends together like chris reconciling with his family.. looking forward to december 1!!
person kaytie
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i kno i kno... there is gonna be a sequel.. but i cant help but miss this fic! it was great! lots of drama and action! that was a sweet family moment when they all came together... who came??? i think i have an idea.. but no way to confirm it until i read! more!!