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ahhh!!! wow! i thought u had died or sumtin! no updates for like a month! u were killin me!!! this story makes up for everything! i loved ur first puppet, but i REALLI REALLI REALLI REALLI TRULY LOVE this story! OMG! so much incest and lust!! and chris!! soooo hottt!!!! update update update!

i cant believe u updated! i thought u had left adultfanfiction.net or sumtin!! im so glad u updated, especillay since u redid this story! the first one was great, the one is excellent, superb!! i hab absolutely zero complaints about this chapter, it was PERFECT! everythin i wanted to read was there! i expecially loved the wyatt/chris scene! awww, poor chris! such torture! update soon (including ur other stories!!)

i cant believe u updated! i thought u had left adultfanfictiot ort or sumtin!! im so glad u updated, especillay since u redid this story! the first one was great, the ise is excellent, superb!! i hab absolutely zero complaints about this chapter, it was PERFECT! everythin i wanted to read was there! i expecially loved the wyatt/chris scene! awww, poor chris! such torture! update soon (including ur other stories!!)

this chapter tooootally rocked! tons of incest and sex with an added touch of drama, perfection! hahaha... wow, its been such a long time since u last wrote! this story totally made up for it! im so glad u did a rewrite! u added so much more drama and sex into it! the endin was so great! i wanna c wat chris is going to do! please update a loooot sooner this time! thank you!

yipppeeee!!! ur back! i hope ur gonna stay for a VERRRRYYY long time this time! u owe us a lot of stories and chapters mister! this remake is the best remedy for not readin ur writing for like a whole month! did i mention how much i missed u? hahaha~ u packed so much into thisst cst chapter, TWO sex scnece (which were the absolute best!!!) some n/c (makes chris like 1000 times hotter! he's jsut so cute helpless!!) and left us with a tease!! please comback and write more tothis story and soon!! and dunt forget ur other story present!!! u left us with THAT and dunt update for a month!!! that is jus cruel and unusual punishment! i've been dyin to read more of that so update please!!!!

yipppeeee!!! ur back! i hope ur gonna stay for a VERRRRYYY long time this time! u owe us a lot of stories and chapters mister! this remake is the best remedy for not readin ur writing for like a whole month! did i mention how much i missed u? hahaha~ u packed so much into this first chapter, TWO sex scnece (which were the absolute best!!!) some n/c (makes chris like 1000 times hotter! he's jsut so cute helpless!!) and left us with a tease!! please comback and write more tothis story and soon!! and dunt forget ur other story present!!! u left us with THAT and dunt update for a month!!! that us cus cruel and unusual punishment! i've been dyin to read more of that so update please!!!!

EEEEE!!!!! UR BACK!! FINALLY!!!! and u remade ur story! i have to tell you it is the best, like always!! its been torturous without ur stories to read!! seriously!! i've been checkin everyday, and u havnt updated! this story makes up for it because it was just so damn good! i mean, cousin on cousin then brother on brother! so much incest and sex! loved it! nd wyatt all over chris like that! aww chris cryin makes him look so cute and hot, and we all know it! he just looks so much hotter when taken forcfully! right?! hehe... update this AND you other story!! u cant leave usss hangin like that on ent!ent!!! its drivin me crazy!

omg! that was so awesomely written i could cry! i enjoyed it that much!! ur absence has realli sucked! dunt leave that long again without warning us! but ur forgiven because this re write is sooo great! satisified my craving! definetely great!! the end was such a cliffy though! ur teasing us for the next chapter arent u!! well u betta hurry, because im gettin anxious for more! o yeah, please update ur toehr story too! i;ve been dyin to read more of that too! especially because of where u left us!

ahhh!! im so mad!! i just wrote a HUGE paragraph reviewin this story and then my computer froze!! o well, ill just type up wat i remember again... so here it goes:
frist of all, I cant believe u finally came back!! i thought u had left us! but u wont ever do that, please say u wont! i am soooo unbelievably happy that u did a rewrite of this story! i thought the original was incredible, but this is 10 times better! i mean it has lust, incest, tort, sex, angst, drama, slash, n/c!! its just so amazing! mayb u could add some BDSM or kink in future chapters? just a suggestion, but I adore this story! im lookin forward to readin more in the VERY VERY VERY VERY near future.. k? and write more stories and update ur otehr stories, because they are ALL SO good!

oh lalala! u finally decided to return huh? took u long enough! hehe, sry, didnt mean to give a hard time~ i just missed ur wrg sog sooo much! i think that made this chapter like a billion times better! i read it, read it again, then went back and read it again!! thats how much i loved it!! haha! the next chapter is gonna b soooo great! hmm.. my predictions :sex,sex,sex,sex,mayb some solo,possible tort, defin. some n/c, and lots of drama! sounds good to me!! lets see wat u write! no matter wat, im sure ill love it! hehe! also wrmoremore for ur other story, present! i've been waitin so patiently for that! reward me please!