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duuuuudddeee! ur totally killing me here!! tkaing this long to update! ur torturing me!!! this cahpter did ease my pain though becasue it was just that awesome!!! that sick pervert!!! stupid barbarus!! can chris recieve ne more pity??(YES!! he can!) i just feel so bad for the guy, but he's also just so cute and hott!! update sooner please! for me?? and updating ur other stories would help too!

omg! ur finally back from u "break"!!! now that u rested (and tortured all of ur fans!), can u PLEASE update all ur stories and fast! this cahpter was a nice start to ur stream of updates to come!! loved every word!!!

hey! wassup?! glad to see u've returned and to give me a wonderful update! that was so hott! CAN THIS STORY GET ANY BETTA?!

Yippee another chapter. i liked the re arranging you've done with this story. ive been waiting for you to review this one for a long time.

omgomgomg!!! u updated this! i cant believe u finally did it!!! iE thE this story! that spell wyatt did on chris was sooo evil!! godsh, that must of been tortue for chris! and i cant melinda slept with wyatt too!! im glad u added barbarus into this story, i agree; it is a great idea! cant wait for more!

yes yes yes! im so glad u updated! but im not gonna complain about the long wait because it seems as though u have enough stress goin on! i appreciate the time u take of to write this story! and it is absolutely amazin, all of u writin is~ so propz to u for taking on a full tim job yet still being able to put up amsing stories!!! ahh! chris in the shower scene! he is just gettin more and more appealin to me! ohh, barbarus takin advantage of chris?! that would be awesome! great idea! will there b a wyatt chris scene in the next chapter?

awww! u must b exhausted! i cant even wake up at 5! not to mention start writing a story and have it come out as great as urs!! u truly amaze me! hahaha... wyatt and melinda! wow, that was sudden! loved it! i wonder wat chris would say to that! haha, and also chris walkin in on wyatt and allison in bed! that was great to! i just felt so bad for chris in the shower scene! but it was still so incredibly hot!! barbarus!!! wat is he plannin to do with chris? that would b so kinky and great! cause we all kno how much we love it when chris is tied up and bein taken without permission, right?! ahh! tons of kink to come i hope! not to mention chris and wyatt still havnt gotten it on!!

another fabulous chapter as always! the first e bee being chris touchin himself in the shower immdiately drew me in! ouch, thats gotta b painful! i can see wyatt is gonna b verrrry creative in tortuin chris! and u put barbarus in this story? great move! does barbarus want melinda or chris? i guess ill read and find out! and wyatt watchin chris in the shower! the end was shockin! wyatt wants to have a chile with his cousin when he has a wife?! ne ways, i also wanted to say thank u or takin time of ur busy worlifelife to update!

chris was just so freakin hott in this chapter! ur writing is just so detailed and has so much imagery which is great! i feel ur pain, i HATE work too! but i need the money so i have tp push myself to go~ but u wakin up so early every morning, gettin ready, writing this flawless story, and then returnin so late ... jeez, u realli are amazin! haha, update soon and ur other story too (present)

i was so shocked to see that u had upated! this is the update i have been most anticipating! all ur stories jus draw me in and leave me cravin for more after each chapter~ im an addict to ur writing! u writing is the best thing u can do for me! thank u so much!! so on with my comments on the chapter: i thoguht i was gonna die when i read baout chris in the shower! wyatts spell was pure torture! but all of us know chirs is jus so hot when bein tortured! and u also asked about barbarus wantin chris at the top of the chapter; my answer is yes yes absolutely yes! ne chance of chris being all tied up, tortued, and being taken is great with me!! hahaha~ melinda is also foolin around with wyatt? how could she do that to chris? well, waitin for more! so update asap!