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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update already! its been months...
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I think this stuff is hot. I use to read AFF stuff for the smut, but I find myself liking more plot. I think I like the plot stuff cuz it's grown up plots. I'd love to read more.
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the charmed universe and Chris is a favorite of mine so I love your stuff!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't leave it here. What happens next? (Barbarus always seemed extra creepy to me, so I think your doing great with him being so evil in this piece)
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah ~ I LOVE this story!! The two scenes with Melinda were great. Seeing both Chris and Wyatt take Melinda at the same time. one up the a$$ and the other up her c*nt, would be a great hot scene to see. Also looking forward to seeing Wyatt react to his vision.
I also really liked seeing Chris's vulnerability at being left behind, forgotten, not worth the trouble. Wyatt will just have to show his brother how important he really is to his big brother.
Hope to see more soon!
I also really liked seeing Chris's vulnerability at being left behind, forgotten, not worth the trouble. Wyatt will just have to show his brother how important he really is to his big brother.
Hope to see more soon!
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and i hope you update soon i want to read more
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEah! Grumpy_Writer is back with his 2 Gremlins. I thought you'd got run over by a raindeer (or Germlin's wearing antlers). Looking forward to more!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t. Okay, I very much enjoy the rewrite. Gremlins are indeed the spawn of Satan. :D Perhaps this review will encourage them not to be so nasty? Ha, anyways, I like your writing style. You use good description. As a plus, I'm always in for Christopher's pain ... I'm very sorry, Chris.
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::gasp:: are my eyes decieving? did he REALLy just update?? haha, j/p~ ahhhh!!! but im so glad u updated! i HATE waiting for ur updates! but that was soo great! wyatt, wat r u doin?! save ur brother! poor chris!! save him!! loved the chapter, love your stories, love u!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! u FINALLYYY updated! u have the most anticipated update of all times! im checking this site everyday for YOUR updates!!! i love them sooo much! and u so did not dissapoint! i thought this was fantastic! oh, no! get out of there chris! nice touch with the vision at the end!