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for Mission to XXX 069

by Archantel

person Emma
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, i'm loving it so far and can't wait to see what happens next, maybe the wine should play with their minds and they all join the natives in their orgy?! Just a suggestion, but maybe you have your own ideas of where this is going.
Well done and keep going so i can read and review
person mishy_mo
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey were's the rest lol - great so far but i'd love to read the rest is there is any more!!

Mishy
person Iolanthe
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha... this is great!! Keep updating it.. I want to find out what happens!
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good first couple of chapters- eevryone's in character, there's some wonderful banter going on, and I can already see where this fict is heading, and I'm very much looking forward to seeing what'll happen next, so...pretty please can we have chapter three?

Look forward to reading the rest...
person Layce74
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This looks very interesting! Can"t wait to see the situations they get into!
person oldwolf
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Cute pso fso far, imaginative to say the least. I wonder if the God of Porn will be making an apperance?
person Alibi Olivia
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I loved the first chapter for it's simple fun. You can already feel the plot looming on the second one. I wonder what's gonna happen. But please, please, please, don't make 'em be stranded there. There's way to many stranded on another world fics. More jokes too next time ;)? I'll keep reading.
person Lt.Rhodes
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Really funny and well written. :D I like to see them fooling around and taking it easy :) Please continue!