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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope ur title dusnt refer to Allah being behind the terrorist attacks cz im Muslim n the last thing i need is to hear ppl blame God for it! It wasnt Allahs act for 9/11 it was sum stupid terrorits who used Islam as an excuse for their stupid actions.
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was stunningly written..cant say any more than that..
hope you write more like that..
hope you write more like that..
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea- Tru facing the horrors of a large scale attack. Two criticisms- 1) the show is set in NYC at least according to the old fox website for the show and two the lack of paragraph breaks made reading difficult.
The ending in which Tru doesn't stop the attack was a good twist.
Overall a promising story- it could do with a minor rewrite for readability and spelling.
The ending in which Tru doesn't stop the attack was a good twist.
Overall a promising story- it could do with a minor rewrite for readability and spelling.