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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Admittedly, not where I thought this would go. Call me cliche, but I was expecting a threesome with two Chrichtons and Aeryn. Nice that I was surprised though, that is always welcome. Too short, needs more, this could go a few places and might be worth exploring.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The urge to MST3K this piece is almost irresistable. Like this bit: "He ignored my plight; hands trailing down my back and sides. They slithered, giving her chills, exciting thrills. It felt so good to be held by him, or whoever it was. "
-Yes, it was so good, it caused a sudden and unexpected shift to the third person!
-Yes, it was so good, it caused a sudden and unexpected shift to the third person!