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for Sparkling

by Eva

person Trillian
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I take it english isn't your first language? It's a good plot so far but maybe you should get someone to proof read it first cos there are a LOT of gramatical errors.
person Isa
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry I only found out about this story now!
It's great!
Go on?
Most certainly!!!
person Hope
schedule March 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You need to right more! This is a good story! MORE, damnit, MORE!