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for Captain Proton and the Planet of Lesbians

by Odon

person Jzeylyn
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my. You have one diabolical sense of humor. I can't remember laughing so much over a fanfic. I only wish I had one of those boob ray guns when I went through my divorce. *sigh*
person carl
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hilarious!!!!! please continue and thanks for the laughs. :)
person Sailor Aurora
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was just too funny!!

A lot of parts had me rolling over in laughter... and most of all, I liked how you used Captain Proton, a tv show character on star trek, to to parody a lot of the Vonager characters... very oringal!

Are there gonna be more after this story? if so, e-mail me when you do another one!
person Dutch
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was weird, but very funny. Well done!!!
person s van
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snicker* Cannot *giggle* stop *hehehehe* laughing!!!!!!!!! *HAHAHAHAHAHA! Brilliant parody! Can't wait to rip it off-er-tell everyone else about it. Egads-an imagination and extensive vocabulary. Loved the commercials. The vacuous-er-voluptuous Constance. ROFL! Haven't seen anything that amusing since the Pink Panther Strikes Back. Or Jimmy Carter's letter severly chastising the USSR for invading Afganistan...Congrats. You have my seal of approval. Not that it is worth much, but it amuses me to say so. All the convoluted sexual references were hilarious. And a plot twist to boot? BTW, doesn't it suck that you get so many hits, and so few reviews? Thus, the long-winded meandering review. Figured if you don't get much, at least it feels good to get a big one. ;) - Sincerely, S Van Der Spoof, Sinecure of Surveillance.