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by GrumpyWriter

person Dominique
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no! i dont care that u used my name! i just thought i would point it out~ i have no problem with it! and about ur lsat chapter, i have no problem with rough sex.. that just added to the drama and i thought that was great! and that drama continued over onto this chapter! glad leo found chris and healed him. there so close to finding out who he is! nice twist to the episode chris-crossed! i love how u tied it together, but in ur own way! nice job! chris and wyatt; wat can i say, i love them together! so i thought their scene was great! im so excited for more! (p.s. im a boy)
person ~*holly*~
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first off, i would like to say im a girl~ wat do u mean did we have a problem with the rough sex! thats wat made that chapter so great! it added drama and suspense and a greater twist to it! i thought u did a great job with it! and ill b sure to check out the other sites! great love scene! very passionate! and the beggining, the drama with chris was awesome. i give this chapter a 15 out of 10! haha! i reviewed and fed ur gremlins, now u write!!
person xfaytx (female)
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved ur last chapter! i dunt have a problem with the rough sex! i thought it was great! great start to the chapter; opening with chris in the shower. that was so sad! atleast someone found him and healed him, but that person happened to be the person chris hated the most~ i like how u mixed the real episode with ur story! that is soo cool!!! now why couldn't the real episode go like this?? hahaha~ loved seeing the sensitive side of wyatt! but im so curious to see how chris is going to react? is he going to freak or go with it?? more more more!!
person SpRiNgeR
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! im a guy, just to let u know. about ur story, i thought the drama in the beggining of the chapter was realli great and well written. this whole chapter was so well written! u added some of the real episode in, but not too much so it would be boring~ and it was cool how some of wyatt's more caring side came out in this chapter.... i like how u write wyatt with mixed personalitites. it would be boring if he was kind to chris all the time and made love to him with love or if wyatt was just cruel all the time and just went after chris with lust. you make wyatt see-saw from the one side to the other with each chapter so i thought it was cool how u switched to wyatts kind side this time because last time it was his lusty side. i would love more so update soon please!
person Jessie
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im sorry i havent been reviewin! my computers is jus soooo slow so it takes forever to submit in a review... but i do read all ur chapters!! and i love every single one of them! so ill review like every other chapter, deal? new ways, im a guy. like how ur doin the poll; im curious to see the results between boys and girls. back to ur story; the rough sex between chris and the demon made the story better! thats the stuff i wanna read about! chris is jus hot when he is struggling, dunt u agree? ne ways, another great scene between wy and chris! i reviewed so tell ur gremlins im expectin another chapter soon!
person ashlee
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg!! this site was drivin me crazy! i see the story, i click it, and then nuttin shows up!! was it jus my stupid computer or was other ppl experiencin this difficulty? ne ways, excellent chapter!! im so glad u put some smut and kink in it, and chris was jus so cute in this chapter!! loved it!
person janice
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
did i ever tell u that i LOVE ur gremlins!!! i cant blieve u fianlly updated this story! and u actually put smut in this chapter too!! yes!!! chris and that demon together was so hot! i was lovin every word! i hope u decide to update this fic soon!
person ~*holly*~
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah! one of my friends told me that u had updated this story so i rushed to a computer to read it and it was great!!! i so needed this chapter! ahh, poor chris! i know i say this like everytime, but poor chris!! ouch! atleast it got his mind of wyatt for now~ but im sure wyatt will find a way to get back at chris! he has to b gettin lonely in the future! cant wait for the next installment! give one of ur gremlins a kiss from me <3
person SpRiNgEr
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo frusteratin!! i left like 3 reviews already and they havnt shown up!! and they were long too!! maybe therese sumtin wrong with the site; this stie is known for havin its occasional problems. hopefully this one will show; i jus wanted to let u know how much i enjoyed this chapter! and aya, phoebe is figurin out the puzzle! aww, chris was desperate enough to go through all that pain to forget about wyatt! i hope u get this message!!
person xfaytx
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::BIG HUG TO UR GREMLINS:: i wass oo happy to see that u had updated! well, i saw it a couple of days ago, but i heard this site was going through some turbulances, and wouldnt let me read it till now, stupid site!!(acutally i love this site!) i liked how u added phoebe catchin on to chris's secrets and maybe findin out his identity.... and i the premonitions too! they were great, added a bit more drama(always welcome!) and chris and the demon was a nice add... seems like chris gets treated like crap everywhere!! god that had to hurt! but what do u expect, it was demon; the only sex they know is probably rough or rape! hmm... wat kinda of future problems could dominic cause... wel, cant wait for more! as always, love u!!