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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
tears were going down my cheek becasue of wyatt!!! i just felt so bad for him... he loves chris so much!! he just doesnt want his brother to die!! that was soo sweet and heartwrenching! i know chrris had to go back... but i wanted him to stay too! becasue i just had too much pity for wyatt! i never thought i would feel this bad for him, but i do!!
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i did review ur other chapter!! i guess it didnt show... this site frusterates me to no end! ne ways.. ill review for both chapters now... ohh! rough sex! always hott! but wyatt killed chris's kitty!! awww!! how did chris get free from the spell?? loved it!!!
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! u updated so fast!! can u update thsi fast more often?? haha... loved every single wrod! i also loved how wyatt took chris so roughly in the chapter before... i felt bad for chris, but at the same time loved it! the willing chris was cute too! the ending was great cause i wasnt expectin that. keep it up!
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i reviewed, and i thought u got it! but then i checked the reviews and it wasnt there!! ::sighs:: i guess ill write another one... the kitty died!!! awww.... great rough sex scene!! hot but sad at the same time... when chris told wyatt he hated him, that was also rather depressin.. but great drama! good to see chris happy in a long time.. cute sex... haha... i wasnt expectin chris to be released from the spell and then kill dominic... how did that happen??? GREAT! AWESOME! FANTASTIC! MORE!
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
tell ur gremlins im so sorry! i was on thanksgiving break and didnt get to get my hands on a computer... loved it loved loved it loeved.. and did i mention, LUVED IT!!! haha... taking chris pressed up against a door.... wow... great! i thought that was amazing!! the happy chris was soooo cute and adorable too! i guess chris is back to the past again... great because then he can continue his work.. bad because no more chris.wyatt scenes!
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u updated so fast! yay! that makes me happy! i had to read all of the chapters again because it was just that fantastic! hahaha... wyatt looked great when he went total om on chris... but then the kitty died and that was realli sad.. also, when chris tells wyatt, "I hate you" that was sad too because they were such a cute couple together... i hope they can salvage their love in the end... wonder how wyatt is gonna react to chris returnin to the past...
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha.. everytime i see that name 'dominic', it makes me laugh... ne ways.. back to ur AWESOME story... u r the best writer of ALL times.. if u ever wrote a book, i will be the first person in line to go buy it.. u r just that GREAT! haha.. u should open up ur own site of ur writing!! that would be sooo cool!!! ne ways... i read both chapters 4 times.. thats says enough... write mroe pelase!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry! Meant to review the last chapter but I'm a print first and read later person. I have a hard time reading stories on computers and never really appreciate them it I do it that way. But I love this story! If you're taking suggestions - I'd really like for Chris and Wyatt to walk off into the sunset together ruling over the world! So its not politically correct. I want them together cause they're really hot and I want for the Charmed Ones and Leo in the past to find out about them and freak out about it. Just cause I'd like to torture them a little. Anyway, I hope your gremlin keeps you up writing cause you write the best C/W stories around.
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a quick update! keep it up! cant wait to see chris's reaction to what happened! i like how u twisted the episode and made it your own! i personally like it ur way ten times more! hahaha~ keep up the good work!
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
did i ever tell u i love ur gremlins! this site has been goin through its ups and downs, so i guess ill check out the other two sites for stories. i loved how u added a lil more leo into the mix; how he was the one to find chris and heal him and learn what happened to him. good choice! and the love scene btwn chris and wyatt was so sweet! in a twisted way... but still so sweet! but i dunt think chris reealli knew wat he was doin so that could b a problem when he wakes up. cant wait for more please.