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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chris and wyatt were both sooo hot in that premonition!!! poor phoebe... think a how disturbing it was for her to watch that.. or, u can think lucky phoebe because she just got to see the hottest guys in the world have sex! hahaha, cant wait to see wat u bring in the next chapter! LOVE ur other story too!! but u can just read my reivew!
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
freebe??? the whole bickering btwn phoebe and piper was funni and cute~ wyatt and chris are so hot together! and chris looked so cute on the couch sleeping! more please!
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
smut! yay! love ur chapters with smut! how old is chris now? sorry, random question... ne ways, cute chapter! chris talking dirty during sex was hot and cute! he seemed like he was babbling... so cute! loved it! write more soon please!
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I can't believe that Phoebe now knows. Love to see her reaction when she finds out that Chris and Wyatt are brothers. Phoebe jumping up and down was funny. Chris and Wyatt having sex was playful and hot. And lastly finding out that Chris and Wyatt are soulmate is cool.
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here's a tidbit for your Gremlin! I feel kind of bad that every review I leave is along the same lines of "I love your stories! Please write more!" But that's essentially the whole point of my reviews. I don't bother leaving reviews for stories I don't like. But is you could find your way so that Wyatt and Chris stay together, having great sex at every opportunity and rule the world it would make me very happy.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it didnt matter that this chapter had no smut because it was so great i forgot it had no smut!!! hahaha... i thought it was SOOOO cool had u put in scenes from the real episode.. it was SOOO cool how u made everything work!! his is the best fic EVER!!
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i read this chapter 4 times!!!! it was so fun to read lines from the real show and having u add ur own twist on it! the ending was shocking!! when wyatt saved bianca only to kill her... i was in tears when i read wyatts confessions... i know im supposed to feel bad for chris, but i feltSOOOOO bad for wyatt.. please let something good happen to wyatt.. like chris forgives him or chris saves him then they can live happily ever after... sumthing!! the poor guy needs his cherub!!!
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i will ALWAYS remain ur loyal reader! ur fics are good no matter what!!! did u ever consider opening up ur own web page where u could post ur stories up??? it would do SOOO well!! i was crying in this chapter... the exchange between wyatt and chris was so heart wrenching.... i felt bad for wyatt!! then wyatt killed bianca!! nice twist! loved it!!
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im so happy that ur updating so often!! keep it up please! because i check this site every morning to see if u have updated!! i only go to this site becasue of u!! this chapter was bittersweet.. im glad chris went back to save wyatt... but half of me was wanting chris to stay with wyatt... becasue wyatt seemed so lost without him... PLEASE end this story with a happy ending where wyatt and chris are both happy... if u ended where wyatt and chris end up hating each other or one of them dies, it would torment me for LIFE!
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh! this chapter was so cool! u r sooo great at adding in parts of the real script yet making it make sense and flow!! i thought that was awesome and u did an amazing job!! phoebe is getting another premonition of chris??? maybe she will figure out the mystery!!! i know ur following the basic story from the show.. of thats so... are u gonna make chris die??? that would break my heart... and then wyatt will be sad!! and probably go crazy... cant wait to read more!! smut to come!! YES!