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by GrumpyWriter

person Eloise
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two gremlins make writer work more. Two gremlins good! And Chris & Wyatt are together again. Happiness! Here's hoping your gremlins keep you busy over the holidays. Do you dress your grelmins up as Santa and an elf?
person Elosie
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, another chapter! Okay, I'm not entirely sure how it fits in with the plot but I'm sure that will come. But where's Wyatt? We desperately need some C/W action. Now that you have two Gremlins I'ms sure you will write twice as fast!
person xfaytx
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another excellent chapter! i liked the exchange btwn phoebe and chris.. seemed natural~ keep updating!
person Janice
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im so happy that u update so fast! loved the chapter as always! chris and phoebe's relationship is realli cute! hehe, update soon!
person ashlee
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
everytime i read a chapter of ur story, it keeps me on the edge of my seat wanting more!! amazing! please update this and ur other story too!!
person Dominique
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chris is just sooooo hott! the scene btwn chis and phoebe wasnt as awkward as i thought it would be.. it seemed pretty smooth and i like how they got a lil clsoer from talking! great! write more! and write more of ur new story because im hooked to that too!
person ~*holly*~
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the ending was sad... chris and wyatt need to be together!!! they just do! they should go through all this hardhsip and torture and serpation and absue... but in the end b togehter... its only right!!!
person Eloise
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! SoPoGa triumphs, the Gremlin is set free and the writing flows again all so I can get my Chris/Wyatt fix. Its all your fault anyway that I'm addicted to this pairing. Writing such lovely stories. All Hail the mighty Gremlin!
person alienangel19852003
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Reconcilation at last! Chris is a kitten. The cutest lil kitten i ever saw! Great 1st chapter!!!
person ashlee
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
an aunt just saw her nephew(s) ( she doesnt kno about chris yet) make love with another guy... how awkward is that?!?! good thing both her nephews are soooo hot!! and by the way
“I um Piper…”

“Spill freebe!”
freebe? hahahaha, i thought that was hillarious!!!!