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by GrumpyWriter

person Dominique
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! ur back! thank heavenes, i thought i was going crzy for a while!! so glad u updated! ohhh!! some bdsm in this chapter! u know how kinky i like it! haha... but ne thing to do with tje two brothers is hot~ hmm... isn't chris supposed to be a little more resilient towards wyatt and his advances? i mean, seconds before, chris was taken by force but now he's willing? i dunno, only a suggestion... but ur fic is the best!! update ALL of them please!!
person janice
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! ur finally back for good!!! im so EXCITED to here more from you!!!!! u realli know how to torture people dunt ya?? ne ways, back to the story- loved the BD with chris.... always looks the best whens he helpless... but we all knew that! awww.... i feel bad for wyatt!! he misses his borhter/parter.... write soon!
person Jessie
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an awesome update!!! and long anticipated! so that was all like a dream connection btwn the two? wow that's gottta suck... phoebe knows the secret!! hmm... wat new levels of trouble and drama could this cause? wyatt and chris doing the naughty! the best! do u mind if i give you a personal suggestion? i dunt know about everyone else, but i kinda miss the sex the two brothers had before, early on in this story... where chris is acutally the level headed one and has second thoughts about it while wyatt is the one to just plow through despite if his brother is a willing partner or not... iunno.. but ur fic is good no matter wat so just keep writing!!
person xfaytx
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its been like wat, a 4182347019234781024879 years since your last update?? hahaha. its okay, as long as you dunt ever stop with this story! i understand ur busy. great chapter. poor wyatt at the end when he woke up all alone. and chris too... he has to deal with his aun phoebe down his back all the time now! ouch! loved the BD used in this chapter!! great sex scene! no one can write better than u! haha, love ya! update soon!
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THis story is really REALLY good! You have to update soon...or else I'll give your gremlins mates so they can reproduce and bug you even more! lol
person ashlee
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg!! this site was driving me absolutely insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was down for like a week?!? is this only happenin to me or is anyone else experiencin??? ne ways!! this was kinda confusin.. wyatt and chris meet in their dreams? awww!!! wyatt's thought at the end was sooo sweet! he loves chris!! how sweet!!!!
person ~*holly*~
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sry it took so long for me to comment... but everytime i came to this site, i got as far as entering the charmed section before it shut down!! so annoyin.. but ne ways... yes smut! i LOVE smut!!! wyatt was so sweet in this... well kinda..... in a way... he loves chirs, thats all that matters! oh no! phoebe knows... this could get interestin
person xfaytx
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was soooooo great!!!! smut and a hot wyatt mixed in with a hot chris.... PERFECT!! cant wait for the next chaoter!!! im soooooooo excited so please hurry! last time i checked, this site was down and then i was busy x-mas shopping!! im so glad i got to read this chapter! it made my day! wonder how chris and phoebe are gonna act after she finds out the truth..
person Dominique
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! that was so hot! smut is the best!!! i hope u write more realli realli realli soon!!!!! love ya!!
person janice
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woot!!! i read that like 10 times!!! thought it was pure genius!!!!! especially the ending! so swweeett!!!! and phoebe finding out the truth.. nice twist!