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by GrumpyWriter

person Briankrause
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, Wyatt kept a cool head while seeing Chris bang someone else. well looks like his cherub is moving on from him without Wyatt realisiing it.
person Briankrause
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bit confusing in the end, but made sense all the same.
person Briankrause
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, getting interesting there, i don't know whether to feel sorry for Wyatt or be happy for chris, damn these plot lines, to many of them.
person Briankrause
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, something we never knew that has happened, but still bit weird to see Wyatt in Leo's body humping Chris, lol,
person Lugi
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
right about now, i clearly hate CHRIS, god i mean, ,lol, can't even think about it, Chris is just sick for what he just did.
person Briankrause
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like they way you tied everything into this, nice one, really liked this chapter.
person Briankrause
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, you are so evil, Phoebe needing to change her underwear, what she doesn't realise is that she just witnessed her nephews banging eahc other. hahahahaha. lol.
person Briankrause
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say, i hate this chapter, i mean Chris is acting all this whore, i mean is he that desperate to sleep with ugly demons like that, even if it means wanting information. i don't know he would leave Wyatt in the frist place, cause Wyatt doesn't want anyone else than chris however Chris is not an angel but whore since he is taking everyone that came by his way. sisck, disgusiting and aweful.


hey gremlin, tell you master to write nice chapter in Slash, scaly demons, is not a nice one.
person Briankrause
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm, i don't get this, is this a dream or real thing, or i havn;t got a freaking clue, enlighten me.
person Briankrause
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i got it, since their bond is so strong, that when they slept, they dreamt be together, which they did, but only in the dreamworld, sice the time difference. i know it makes sense to my brain but its not coming out right, anywways UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON, cause i want to know what happens next.