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by GrumpyWriter

person j.t
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was excellent!! im realli lookin forward to this story!! i realli realli realli liked playtime so im postive ill like this story 2! ur the best! keep updatin please!
person janice
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! the first chapter was realli long!! i hope ur other chapters will b as long because i cant get enough!!! im addicted to ur stories!! hahaha.. maybe thats goin a lil too far, but the first chapter was amzing.. cant wait for ur future chapters to come!!
person a*v*a
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey!! ur bak with a new story!! and not just any new story, itz a sequel to mai absolute favorite story!!! i could kiss u rite now~ hahaha.. that was an awesome start to the story!! cant wait till it gets more intimate!! all those s u s u had for the summary of the story made me know that im gonna love this story just as much or even more than playtime!! write more please!!
person xfaytx
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ur such an amazin writer!!! that was the best ever!!! im just happy that u started the sequel to playtime!! i love all of ur stories, but i hab a feelin this one is gonna b a favorite! ^.^
person damon
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!! the suspense to find out wat happens next is killin me! so update soon please!
person ashlee
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YESS!!! a sequel?!?!?! u r a GOD!! this story is gonna b amazing!! thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! i loved the first chapter!!! i can tell this is gonna b as good or even better than playtime!! continue PLEASE!!!
person findly
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE u!! i only read the first chapter and im already in love with this story! PLEASE dunt end this story ne time soon!!!! if this is ne thing like playtime, i can tell itz gonna be aweeesssooommmeee!! u totally rule!!
person SpRiNgEr
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! i am the happiest person EVER right now!!! u actually made a sequel!! YAY!!! the first chapter was absolutely fabulous!! if that was a preview to how the rest of the story is gonna b, than this story is gonna be the BEST EVER!! update soon please as possible!!!!!!!!! dunt leave us hangin!!!
person j.t
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was an excellent start to this sequel!! couldn't ob done a betta job!! cant tell u how much im look forward to this story!! playtime was awesome, but i hab a feelin this one is gonna b betta!!!
person ~*holly*~
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful beggining! if this story is ne thing like ur other stories, im positive it wont dissapoint.. cant wait it starts to get diirrrtttyy!! hahaha