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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
did u erase all ur hits?? i thought there were like 300.. hmm.. ne wayz.. wow, this chapter was jus.. wow.. hahaha.. do i even have to tell u i enjoyed it?? ill tell ya ne way.. i LOVED it! hahaha.. well, i love all ur writing~ i cant wait to read ur updates for this story and ur other 2 stories!!
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay~ i can finally review!! well, im happy that chapter 2 was great, but im sad because u didnt write ne mor chapters!! and u didnt update ne of ur other 2 stories! ur r the best adultfanfiction writer ever!!! so write more!! ur stories r the only stories i read!!
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!! chris and wyatt got a lil kinky~ hahaha..loved this chapter!! i sooooo cant wait to read more!! i reviewed, u write!! its wat we agreed rite???
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was great!! but i still like it better when chris is the one below wyatt~ i dunt kno y, chris is just soo much cuter when he is helpless and wyatt jus seems like he should be in control.. thats just mai opinion.. i still loved this chapter though!! i reviewd... so u nd the gremlins keep ur end of the deal and update more!!
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heyyyy, you are continuing it. YAY!!!! I like where the story's going and hopefully your next chapter will follow your note at the end...
Keep up the good work!!!!
Keep up the good work!!!!
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh!! y havent u updated this story yet?? its sooo goood!1 i want to read some more now!! sry if im impatient but it sounds sooo good! so write some more soon!! and make the next chapter realli long with lotz of sex!! hahaha~
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh!! ur kilin us readers!! u cant just write a begginin like that and not update!! hahaha... so please write more
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i was sooooo happy when i saw this story!!! a sequel to playtime!! YESSS!!!! no doubt in mai mind that this story is gonna rock!! i LOVED the first chapter and it didnt even have any sex or kink in it!! the rest of the story is gonna be fantastic!! i hope u keep story for a looonnnggg time!!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay!! u actually listened and made a sequel! i read the first sentence of the 1st chapter and i was already hooked!!! there wasnt even ne in in the first chapter and i luved it!! all i got to say is keep it comin!! more se!!se!!!!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was greaaattt!!!! u r the best writer ever!!! u totally rule!!!verry nice start to this story!!! with a start like that, this story is gonna go farr!!! im lovin it!! cant wait till it gets sexual! than im gonna realli realli realli realli love it!!