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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fantastic!! loved it! that chapter just left me wanting more! i cant wait to see wat happens next chapter.. im so excited to read this!! i LOVE this story so write alot alot alot more!!!
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great!~ i loved it~ the threesome~ that was h i l i loved it! so u said that wyatt is gonna do something to make chris mad anough to go back in time.. hmm.. im jus takin a wild guess here, but in the summary u said n/c.. so im guesin wyatt is gonna force chris into bed and chris is gonna be mad and upset so he'll go bak.. am i rite??? if i am, thats a realli good storyline!! i hope u update soon!!
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! amazingly, unbelievably awesome!! does that make sense?? hahaha~ do i even have to tell u how much i enjoy this story??? i sooo cant wait for the next couple of chapters~ wat wil happen btwn chris and wyatt?? i cant wait!!!!! literally!! so write more please!!
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another chapter!! yay!! i enjoyed this chapter sooo much!! tell the gremlins thank you!! and make sure they keep pushing u to write more!!!! the hint u said about the next few chapters is making me soo excited for more!! i want more more more!!
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!! im so excited for more~ hehe.. loved clubclub scene with chris and the other two.. hahaha~ that was great~ i cant for the next few chapters to come!!!
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! u didnt update yet! itz prob. because this site was kinda of screwed up for a while.. o well.. i hope u can write some more sooN! bye!
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey~ wats goin on with this site? i've been tryin to get on foreba but it kept comin up with some error thing!! it was drivin me crazy!! u didnt update yet!!! ahh!! i was realli hopin to read this story! wat happend tpo all ur hits?? there were like a couple hundred and now theres like only 2??
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this site was soo freakin frusteratin!1 first it woudnt let me on to the charemd page, then, it wouldnt let me review ur story!! but now it works so her i go.. that was a great chapter! ha! chirs finally got his revenge! that was realli hott! haha.. im reviewin so u have to be writing!! k? that was the deal rite??
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wat happened to all ur hits?? there like all gone!! there were like 400!! wat happened??? y r they gone?? ne wayz, i read this chapter like a day or two ago, but couldn't review~ but this chapter was amzin! but thats no surp sin since everyhthing u write is amazin!!! u diupdaupdat yet?? i was hopin to find like 3 more chapters!! i guess u were busy, but i hope u find some time to write!!
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im just curious, but are u a guy or girl?? i know, completely random.. jus curious~ haha.. but wow~ loved this chapter! it was long too! yay, thats a bonus!! the review thing wasnt workin when i read it so i kept waitin till it would work so i could review this chapter~ y didnt u update yet?? i guess u were waitin for some reviews.. but the review button wasnt workin so other ppl prob couldn't review either.. but we are all readin so write write write!!