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by GrumpyWriter

person Eloise
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, isn't there some way you could bring Adult Evil Wyatt to to the past in his own hot body to make wild monkey love to Chris and freak out the P3? It would be such fun. More please!
person Eloise
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grumpy_Writer! Please write more. I want to see what happens when Chris goes into the past. You MUST have a scene where the girls find out about Chris & Wyatt. Please! To satisify my evil side.
person ashlee
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
watz goin on?!?!?! i've been waitin for ever for u to update this story!!! i've checked like everyday!!! and still no update?! please hurry bak and write some more!! we're all waitin!!
person xfaytx
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! that chapter was sooooo good!!! i loved it! that was soo worth the wait!! the chris/wyatt action was great!! i loved the way u made the situation.. kinky fun! hehe.. i hope u make more kinky sex scenes like that in future chapters!!
person ~*holly*~
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was one of the best updates for this story so far!! i think it was because of the sex scene!! poor chris, but he loked so hott!!! i dunt kno y, but wyat on top of him like that jus made chris seem even hotter! ahha.. its the kinky side of me.. haha~ is there gonna b more stuff like that in the future chapters? if nadd add them in!! haha
person ashlee
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! so some time travelin in the next chapter? that should make this interestin~ whew.. that was some scene in this chapter!! it was great! ahh! a bound chris being taken advantage of.. wow.. that was GREAT! haha.. it made him seem 10 times hotter! haha.. loved it.. write more of that kinky stuff!! .. i.. its the devil in me~ lookin forward to more kinky scenes and time travelin in the next chapter which i hope u write soon!
person churio
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! u updated another chapter! wat tooke u so long?? ill forgive u becasue this chapter was so good!! loved the smut in it! hehe.. i thought that was the best part! oo chris was so cute!! and t wat was hott when he went into sex overdrive with chris~ haha.. i loved the kinkiness of it all.. a bound and vulnerable chris mxed with a sex driven wyatt.. very good ombo! haha~ so some time traveling to be expected?? cant wait!
person Damon
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u finally updated! yess! and this chapter was excellent.. loved the last scene with wyatt and chirs in bed~ that was the best! i hope u write more like that.. haha.. very errotic and kinky~ so chris will b meetin the charmed ones soon? cant wait to see wat happens~
person dominique
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!~ i cant wait for the time traveling bit.. i wanan see how chris interacts with his mom and his aunts.. should b interestin.. and see how wyatt reacts when he finds out wat chris did.. oo!! the smut was soo good in cha chapter! i loved it! u finally added the n/c and bdsm stuff in.. i hope it is not just a one time thing and u add it into future chapters!!
person Eloise
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! Am I evil for wanting Chris and Wyatt to walk off into the sunset together hand in hand?