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by GrumpyWriter

person kammy
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was incredible!! my favorite so far!!! i hung on to every single word!! i was readin it slow so i could savour each wrod, then i read it again! i thought it was sooo great! i LUV ur writin! u r the absolute best!! im glad u finally udpated this story! kink, incest, bdsm... that chapter rocked! im lookin forward to more!! thank you!!
person Janice
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woot woot!!! u updated! thank the lord!! i thought i was gonna go nuts!! but the wait was sooooo wroth it, because that chapter just blew my mind!! chris just looked soo incredibly hot!!! like mouth waterin, i tink im gonna go crazy hot!! i hope u write more chapters like that! chris tied to the bed like that, waitin to b fucked! wow!!! amsazin!!! lovin it! haha, please update soon and also update puppet, becuase im waitin to read that too! thank yoU!
person Dominique
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i was soo happy when i checked and saw that u had update this story! i've been sooo anxious to read the next chapter for thsi story! and when i rit, it, i was sooo not dissapointed! it was 1000 times better than i imagined!! and trust, i let my imagination run wild! thanks for such a great chapter! im hopin ur gonna keep up with the incredible writin! cant wait for more! please update ur other story too because i love that one too! thank you so much!
person xfaytx
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was perfect!! im serious, there was absoltuely noo flaws!!! perfection!! everything i could ask for is right there! i had to read it like 20 times before i was satisified because i just luved it so much! hehe.. whew, chris chained up like and waitin for wyatt to fuck him!! i thought i was gonna die!! that was sooo great!!! collar and allOVEDOVED it!!! i hope u write mof thf that in future chapters because i couldnt get enough of chained up chris! ohh! wyatt is gonna b so amd that his cherub rna off!!! more punishment?? hmm,.... more please!!
person jessie
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! wow, it feels like forever since the aslt time u updated! probably because i was so anxious to read this chapter; hahaha.. i thought this was so great! wyatt playin with a chained up chris! yay!! the shackles, chain.leash, collar, rough play, torture.. the list just goes on and on.... and i was soooo totally lovin it! now that chris ran away, again, maybe wyatt will go get him and mayb punish him again? bdsm, tort, humil, n/c... wow, now theres sumtin to think about! i hope u write more because anything u write is 10 times better than wat i can think of in my head!!! hehe.. also, please write more on puppet!! that fic is so awesome too!
person xfaytx
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why aren't u updatin?! u left us withn a cliff hanger and then u dunt update?! ur killin me with anticipation! update soon please!
person bayb
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its been like 2 weeks and yet, still no update! come back and write some more please! the last chapter was soo great! it left me cravin for mroe!
person SpRiNgEr
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was... wow... haha especilly loved the endin!! but the only problem is that u left us with a tease! now its drvin me up the wall!! im sooo excited for the next chapter! i sense lotz of kink and smut!!! cant wait!
person Janice
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! that was so great! why havent u posted more yet? been bz? well ur devoted fans are waitin! hahaha.. LOVED the last chapter to death! i thought it was so great! poor chris... caught under wyatt yet again.. good for the readers because we can read lots of kinkiness!! haa.. lookin forward to ur post!
person ashlee
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was soooo great! loved it loved it loved it! hehe.. u left a great endin to the chapter to open up the next chapter with tons and tons of naughtiness!! haha... playtime!! yay!! wat kind of things is wyatt gonna do to vulnerable chrissy?? hmm... cant wait to read more!