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February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. It's well written and I could totally see the scene in front of my eyes. Great work!!!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story, it would've been more fun, if you wrote more, since it would be fun to watch Phoebe struggle with her premonition and knowing both her nephews will someday become lovers. lol. hilarious.poor Phoebe, feel sorry for her. and If you do decided to write the next chapter, please feel free to e-mail me, cheers.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just, wow. I simply ADORE this fic; it is beautiful and INCREDIBLY hot. It's funny- the sex itself isn't that graphic, but the words you use...I mean YEESH! You HAVE to write a sequel or something, anything, it would be wrong NOT too.
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It's definately my favorite story I've read for these two. I love Chris/Wyatt fic. I wouldn't mind a sequel though. I'd love to know how they ended up at that point. So a sequel would definately be good. But I just love this story anyway. If not a sequel you have to write more for these two you're so good at them.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I LIKEY!
Sounded intelligent, didn't it? I can just picture her face as she tried to figure out what to tell Piper.
And I like how you left no doubt that Wyatt would be dominating Chris so completely. Great story.
Sounded intelligent, didn't it? I can just picture her face as she tried to figure out what to tell Piper.
And I like how you left no doubt that Wyatt would be dominating Chris so completely. Great story.
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good! Have you thought about writing more to it... like a sequel or a whole nother story? That was good!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
Okay, I just have to say, that was the hottest thing i have ever read! I'm kinda new to the whole adult fiction thing, but wow, that was awesome! You really wrote the scene well, brovo! Please keep writing and please please update soon!! Thanks!
Travis
Okay, I just have to say, that was the hottest thing i have ever read! I'm kinda new to the whole adult fiction thing, but wow, that was awesome! You really wrote the scene well, brovo! Please keep writing and please please update soon!! Thanks!
Travis
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* That's NOT something any relatives of the boys hsould be seeing! *winces* I don't envy Poebe in the least! I certainly wouldn't want to explain THAT version to Piper! WHY don't Phoebe show Leo the verison and LET him explain to Piper? Or summon Cole and MAKE him explain?
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No way! That's it!? It can't be. It's too good! I love your descriptions. Please continue!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's always best to put those two together, who cares if their brothers!!!!(^_^)