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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way this story ended. Wyatt made a big mistake messing with Chris like that.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's the perfect place to end it. I love Wyatt's pyscotic thought process. and the imageries...
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, nice story and please excuse me, cause i have an habit of reviewing every single chapter, no matter how long they are, thats what i tend to do in Fanficition.net. lol. anyway, its kind of funny to see Chris drunk, and i really like the way you wrote the drunken Chris. and the muffled laughter hiding from Wyatt, lol.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say, Wyatt looks very pissed off with Chris, and Chris made a big mistake, there saying one thing he doesn't control, since he knew Wyatt is a Control freak.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Chris, i don't know whether to feel sorry for him, or blame him for getting himself into this situation and i have to say, the effects of the alchol drained away dramtically.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
too cruel, even for Chris, one can only imagine how he must feel, gagged and tied, lol. Evil Wyatt.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
did i say cruel in the last review, well starch that, i say this is cruel, Poor chris, powerless and vunerlable.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
alright, first i don;t know whether to vanquish you for finishing the story or encourage you for making Wyatt feel guilty, which he deserves, i mean its bad enough being tied and gaged all night, but being seen by some body else when you are really weak and naked. *shudders* and its cruel too, Wyatt evil WYATTT, now i can see where their relationship shattered, playtime turned into a nightmare. well let me check out your other works since you seem to write some interesting fics.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why?!!!!!!!!!!!!! why?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!! continue it!!!!!!! anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am begging you!!!!!!!!!!! I'm actually crying right now seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm telling you the truth I'm crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD CONTINUE OR OR OR ANYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, when do you think you will update again?