rate_review Reviews

mmmm... nice one
I really like how you wrote this one. There's nothing I'd change or complain about. You kept the tension at a perfect level. :)

Sorry it took me so long to review. Good job on your first smut-fic. I'm fanning myself over here! It will take me a while before I'll attempt my own. Maybe I'll wait for my hubby to go out of town since it worked so well for you!

Great smut reply to the weekly challenge! I hope you try it again......

OMG! That was excellent! First attempt at erotica? Surely you jest. Whew - must log-off - my computer's overheated! LOL

Wow! I think I need that ice water! LOL.

Very nicely done. Loved the *teasing* between Grissom and Sara. I think your first attempt at smut was right on. Hope to read more!
:)
Rica

Oh wow... that is just what I needed. :) Geez, that sound as bad as I think it does? lol!
That was so very well written, you really ought to write more! Definitely.
I have no coherent thoughts at the moment. I loved every part of it--to Grissom's soft voice at the beginning, to his abruptly leaving her, to Sara deciding to simply "take care of herself" to the ice water, to his "not while I'm here" to... well, you know. :) It was so well... put together. Very much IC.
loved it! :)

Anansay