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for His Heart

by GrumpyWriter

person brooke
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was great! nice and long!! just the way i like it!! r ur future chapters gonna b as long?? i hope so!! make ur sex scenes longer please!!! they're sooo good!!
person dominique
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was soooo good! omg~! i think that was mai favorite chapter!! i cant wait to read more... literally! so u hab to come back and write more asap because i cant wait ne longer!!
person xfaytx
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg!! that was awesome!! i mean unbelievably awesome!! damn darryl!! had to interrupt it!!! that cuffs were hott!!!!! so wyatts the kinky one eh??? haha.. not complainin cause im lovin it!!! nuttin more to say 'cept more please!!!!
person janice
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if i had to rate this chapter from 1 to 10 (ten being the best), i would say i would give it a 12!!! yes it was that good!!!! verry kinky!! loving it loving it loving it!!!! i demand more!!! please!! :)
person ashlee
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::applause:: that was some of your finest writing! so madd propz for u!!!! only thing left to say is "keep it comin'!!!!!"
person SpRiNgEr
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u are the master of adult fiction!! no other way to put it.... u totally rock at writing sex scenes!! u are one kinky writer and i LOVE it! u make everythin 10 times more steamy!!! gotta hand it to u.. u totally ROCK~
person ~churio~
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was realli realli good!! no, it was BRILLIANT! hahaha... ill b checkin in shortly to make sure u updated this story and im prayin u will!!! so update soon, for me???
person ~*holly*~
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh!! that was amazing!! i love ur styl of writinghis his is mai favorite story!!! playtime and puppet tie for second!! hahaha.. but "His Heart" is definately my favorite so far so please update this story as much as u can!! but dunt forget about ur other stories!!
person Kandy
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was sweeetttt!!!! very hott!! i would have to say, one of ur best chapters.. verrrryy good!
person brooke
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love chris/wyatt fics. but i havent been able to find ne decent ones until i found out about ur stories! u r a great writer and i enjoy all of ur stories, especially this one so i say 'write on!!!'