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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u updated!! yes!! finally!! all ur time was worth it! this chapter was amazin!! with all the problems on the site, im surpirsed u got to update! i hope u can update all htree stories verry soon@
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! this is an amzin story!! wow! i mean realli good!! im impressed! ur scenes are so detailed! im realli lookin forward to read more!
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u updated~ hurrayyy!! hahaha.. i kno, i sound gay.. but im so excited! that was wonderful! great! amazing! update soon!!!
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
all are ur hits gone for all ur stories?? that totally sux!!! but this story is soo good so please write more!! k?? got it??
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just realized all my favourite charmed stories are by Grumpy Writer! I love this pairing. So please, please keep it up (especially His Heart).
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!! stupid website!! did ne one else have trouble gettin on to it?? ne wayz, another eexcellent chapter!! it was oo long!! yess!! i got to read more! i hope all ur other chapters will be just as long!! i say ur sex scenes need MORE detail!
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
like always, great chapter! it was long! yay!! ahh!! u made chris sound even hotter the way described him!! the sex scene, totally awesome!! i would say more detail!! but its up to u.. ur the great writer!! haha.. ill check bak in to see if u wrote ne more on any of ur stories soon!
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u updated this story!! this chapter was great!! this story jus gets betta and betta!! yea!! wat did happen to leo?? i totally forgot about him!! and i dunt remeber u mentionin prue... wel, the sex scene was hot!! ur the master! of scenes!! we want more!!
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sry, havent reviewed this story for a while! but i do read all of ur chapters and they are GREAT!!! im jus to lazy to review.. but ill start reviewing from now on.. give u some encouragement.. ahhaha
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahaha.. they made a bet?? that was GREAT! good way to add the sex!! need i say it, but another amzing chapter~ no surprise there.. read ur ideas for future chapters.. and im lovin where u gona take this story!! and i would say more detail!! and do i see leo or prue makin an appearance in future chapters??? hmm..