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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
r u gonna do a sequel?
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
intersting chapter,
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hm, when i read the part, BEEP, BEEP, i thought Wyatt was swearing as he neared his climax, but than the Beep turned out to be an alarm clock, Dumb me, lol. and when some one says THE END in the end, it usually means its the END, lol, i m not ,making any sense.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now i can see the issues of Leo and Chris, lol, that was unexpected, and i don't want to be a "annoying one" but you seem to have bits of words missing from here and there or three words mashed into one. well anyways, let see what happens next.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, this was unexpected, the elders blocked him from entereing the heavens, wel they must be pissed off and wonder what Chris is going to go through
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay so this is the changed future, wonder what happened to Leo and the other, lets hope that Future Chris didn die in vein
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice to see Daryll making an appeareance. Wyatt is spoiling chris.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and while reading it, I noticed there was a chapter missing. It went from ch.4 to ch.6...Chris tried to escape up there then he's snuggling in bed. Thought you'd like to know. Otherwise, great story!!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good read
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u ended it!!! damn!! iloved this story!! i understand though.. atleast now u can write more for ur other two stories which are both fnatastic!!! this story ended with a bang!! that was an awesome ending!! im sadd to see this story go, but happy since u will b able to write more for ur other stories and maybe even write a new one!!! cant wait!!