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for Last Chance

by Hazeleyed

person Kay
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NNNOOOOO!! How can you leave it off there!! Please please please update soon!
person zenia
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far. This is my first reading of a CSI fanfic. Thanks for meking it a good choice XD
person Greeneyez82
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fic. It is great and I can't wait to see what's next. Just a thought though....WHAT TAKES SO LONG TO UPDATE!!!!!! Honestly!! We fic junkies need our fix more often. :)
person Victoria Lynn
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YOu can't leave it like that?!!!?!>?!?!?!? What are you trying to do to me? Make me have a heartattack? It is good. I LOVE this story. It has to be one of my top faves and there is like only five of them. Keep it up, Sweet!!!!!!!!!
person Jill
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon, I cannot believe you ended the chapter there!!! By the way, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
person jbr12476
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, what's it gonna take *opens up wallet and sighs* Five dollars ain't gonna cut it. What about a check? Will you take a check. I'll start making it out right now if you update this fic as soon as possible. What?! Don't look at me like that. Everyone has a price, so just name it. This is by far my favorite fic of all the ones that I have read out there and if you make me wait too long for an update I'll...well I don't know what I'll do but I'll think of something. I can't wait to see what happens now that Grissom has his memories back. Please let Sara be okay, I don't know if my heart can take another cliff hanger. Absolutely freaking awesome story.
person Stephanie
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter! Please continue soon!
person gaelicprincess
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay now, that was just mean.

person Mirelle
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That cliffhanger is cruel! Please, please, please, write the next chapter as quickly as you can so that your poor readers can be put out of their tortuous misery! In all seriousness though, fabulous chapter, and I will be checking everyday for the next. Mirelle
person clueless
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!

*whack whack whack* <---- that would be me hitting my head against the keyboard. Now the letter 'Q' is stuck to my forehead.


You already know this is terrific. I doubt you need me to tell ya that, although I know that reading my reviews gives me a charge; I am making a point of reviewing!

I love the part with the baby book. I remember reading something, then immediiately going into ultra-parinoid mode when something didn't match up exactly with the baby book. (What to expect when you're expecting) anyhoo.

The part with Gris' memory returning was especially well done. I can picture him on his knees, concrete tearing through the material on his knees... maybe an artistic trickle of blood out of one nostril.... well. I have an overactive immagination. Otherwise, I also really enjoyed the C/W relationship- even though that isn't usually one of my natural 'ships. Hmm. I'm running out of things to say. I like your take on Greggo- playing up the If only I... bit.

You rock.

andd, since I am still your groupie-cum-stalker-cum-groupie... if you ever decide you want another beta let me know. I would be happy to... although you would have to put up with me doing the occasional "EEEEEEEEEEEE!!!"

:)

Jess