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Hey, just so you know, 60 miles per hour is in no way fast. It is a normal speed for driving to work. Usually when people speed in the states for baby purposes they can get up to 100 mph. Then a cop invariably pulls them over. Then they tell they cop what's up, and he escorts them. :) BUt anyhow, we'll pretend there were twisty country roads and anything over 60 would have been fatal ;).

Also, cute Firefly/Serenity reference. Har har.

Great story!

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. I grew very attached to your Grissom and Sara. Oh...and somebody has been watching a little too much Firefly, huh? lol. I love that show too! Thanks for sharing this story.

I just started reading CSI fanfiction and if this is an example of the quality, I'm going to be reading it for a long time to come. Excellent story.

AWESOME!!!! AMAZING!!!!! STUPENDOUS!!!!!! This is without a doubt my favorite fan fic on this WHOLE ENTIRE SITE!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a WONDERFUL author and I just LOVE this story!!!! I HOPE YOU POST A NEW CHAPTER SOON!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great, realistic, detailed, believable, best story on this site!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh please go on!
i want to know what's going to happen! :)

hazel... I've read this fic several times and am very glad you are continuing it... It is an amazing fic on several levels, but I must truly complement you on your sensitive handling of the fertility issues facing Sara in the fic.

I am 31 and have been undergoing infertility treatment for over three years now. Though I'm not perimenopausal as Sara is in your fic, I am unable to conceive and carry a child naturally and thus far all treatment has failed. I don't know if you've experienced this problem yourself or just read about it, but your portrayal of Sara - her emotions, her doubts, her fears and her pain - is very accurate in my experience and written so well and so true.

I am a major CSI fan - particularly a G/S shipper - and identify with the character of Sara Sidle a lot, but this fic made me feel that connection to an even greater degree. It isn't simply good smut or good G/S romance - it's a good story about a tough issue with a happy resolution [well, as much as I've read so far...] that gives me hope.

Keep writing. Great job.

CS

we are still hanging we hope you update soon. i have enjoyed this story.

i know u must have a life and are busy or whatever...but could you lease update the mother fucking story?? uve already written 22 chapters..so you might as well finish it..come on..plus by the time you have written the next chapter i have to read back because i cant remember what was on the one before..JUST DO IT

i just spent 2 days reading 22 chapters. great story and you're a great arthor.please don't leave us hanging.updat soon.

thank you so much for updating it! ive been waiting for so long...i read loads of grisson/sara fan fiction because i am just obsessed with the 2..and i have to tell you that i have only ever read 2 that stayed true to the characters, this one and another one called growing up (on FF). i really like your story.

at first i thought u were gonna make sara loose the baby because it would be too hard to incorporate it into the story..but so far everything is going really well (despite the memory loss and the car accident)...

do you think u could write some more sex though..those are my fav. parts..

KEEP IT UP- I LOVE IT