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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the read. Good stuff!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great writing. I truly enjoyed reading and couldn't walk away from the screen. I hope you will continue to write.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi ive just finished last chance and its been the best story ive read in ages. its great to fall into a story. i really enjoyed it. thankyou, you should be proud. simone
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read a lot of fanfic, and recently, a lot of GSR fanfic... I never read long ones becasue they rarely hold my attention. I dont know what it was about chapter 1 that made me decide to continue reading on, but I am glad that I did. I became addicted to your fanfiction this weekend. You captured Gil and Sara so well, and I truly enjoyed every moment of it.. even laughed out loud with the characters at times. FANTASTIC job. I just wish I could have a copy of the full story readuly available to read on my computer.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! i love this story!! its the best ever!
keep writing!!
keep writing!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought that the argument has non-sense and the script was the typical one of all those annoying fics where people just have continuous orgasms and then say "I love you, oh I love you so so so much". But that was at first. I've become absolutely addict to your fanfic, and I have not stopped reading it during these 4 last nights.
I don't wanna act like a expert-in-stories-who-knows-all, because I'm not. But I want to say something that is true: you are very good at dialogues, at the action of writting what your characters do. Even if they could be out of character, or be placed on a bad script. You can make all that dissappear because you always know which is the perfect phrase to keep us speechless, the best comment of a character and the way for him to say it.
You made very happy reading this, and I sincerely thank you. Please keep on writting! (Specially about C.S.I. Las Vegas ^^)
(And forgive my bad English, I'm Spanish and I don't express myself fine in your language)
Good luck and best wishes to you ^^
I don't wanna act like a expert-in-stories-who-knows-all, because I'm not. But I want to say something that is true: you are very good at dialogues, at the action of writting what your characters do. Even if they could be out of character, or be placed on a bad script. You can make all that dissappear because you always know which is the perfect phrase to keep us speechless, the best comment of a character and the way for him to say it.
You made very happy reading this, and I sincerely thank you. Please keep on writting! (Specially about C.S.I. Las Vegas ^^)
(And forgive my bad English, I'm Spanish and I don't express myself fine in your language)
Good luck and best wishes to you ^^
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooo... just a quick note that i loved this, congrats, keep it up!!
good work, you made grissom come alive! the only suggestion id make would be to lengthen the few cath/warrick bits, they seem to stop abruptly to me, but the rest was amazing!!!
good job!
good work, you made grissom come alive! the only suggestion id make would be to lengthen the few cath/warrick bits, they seem to stop abruptly to me, but the rest was amazing!!!
good job!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story noticed ur firfly references v. cool. u gonna do a sequel?
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable story. Can't wait for your next story. You are great.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....
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The sexual tension in the first few chapters was intense. I love how you bring out the reality of the discomfort that people feel when they are in the thrall of apparently unrequited love. And then the (pardon the pun) climax in the mountain cabin. That was a very creative way to bring Sara and Gil together, her saving him from a marraige-minded widow! I loved it. I'll have to read more!
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The sexual tension in the first few chapters was intense. I love how you bring out the reality of the discomfort that people feel when they are in the thrall of apparently unrequited love. And then the (pardon the pun) climax in the mountain cabin. That was a very creative way to bring Sara and Gil together, her saving him from a marraige-minded widow! I loved it. I'll have to read more!