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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... I can't wait until you update again!!!! *waits impatiently* ;)
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woweee...Sarah pregnant...
I am very anxious to read the rest. Hope you keep writing!
I am very anxious to read the rest. Hope you keep writing!
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I love this story so damn much!
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! I hope to see more very, very soon.
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I have been enjoying this up till now, eagerly awaiting this next chapter and you certainly didn't disappoint!!! Please Please post more soon!!! You can't leave it hanging there!!
Eve
Eve
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great update. I love the sneaky DNA on the toothbrush. Very creative. Can't wait to get this all resolved! Update soon.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovin this story, please please please update it soon.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story, it reads really well and is absolutely convincing, you've got the characters down perfectly. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. It is well thought out and has numerous twists similar to the actual show CSI. Are you going to kill Gris off? Are you going to write in a wedding? Is Sara pregnant yet? Will she even get pregnant? When the relationship comes out in the open what will be the teams reaction? I await the answers to these and many more questions so keep up the good work and update soon.
Maggie
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! If it's not one thing, it'otheother. I like the fact that you kept the story going after they'd finally come clear on their emotions. And I'm still gonna stick with my first assessment-it's like a Dara Joy but with an actual plot. Please update soon.