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for Last Chance

by Hazeleyed

person Saliaah
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really love this one. I always love the combination of a great storyline and great sex. well, u are good in both of it and i can tell u it´s really enjoyable. So I´m thrilled to read more. I wanted to scream at my PC for more at the end of chapter 12. U know how to tease someone with ur chapterendings...
person Adrian
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This a great story. You're a wonderful and talented writer.
person Amy
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as usual.
person Eileen
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is just wonderful! OH, the angst. Let him remember!
I love your writing,thanks for the great fic!

person UTMB
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Please not another cliffhanger ::G:: Wow, this is a brilliantly written chapter that has left me wanting more ::hint hint:: Oh, I know shouldn't harass for another chapter, but this is just so damn good! Written beautifully, and, as you should know, the plot is brilliant. Please tell me that Grissom will get him memory back, I'd be so sad if he didn't - it just would feel right. Anyway, wonderfully written, I can't wait for more. Thankyou for writng such a brilliant, amazing fic!
person Kris
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, great story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Anansay
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH sweet jesus! Please tell me that will jog his memory into remembering, and they can get on with the "happily ever after' part of their romance!! Please!?! :)
This is heartbreaking. Sara having to go on as a single mother when the FATHER is right there, and just not remembering... Okay, now I'm thinking maybe he'd never remember and just be an 'uncle'... but, of course, you'd never do that to us.
Would you?
Of COURSE not! lol!

The suspence is killing. And you've done a fabulous job of creating it. I never thought this story would take this detour. Great job! *thumbs up*
person NumbPrincess
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, that was another great chap. I am so glad grissom knows now... Can't wait to see what happens next!!
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 was such a crazy chapter! Woot! Thats crazy how Gil forgot EVERYTHING of their time together. Interesting to see what'll happen next. ;o)
person brainfear
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. No raunchie words describing their lovemaking. Like the 'p' word. Uhh. Post mor more soon!