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for Last Chance

by Hazeleyed

person Amy
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome chapter. So glad this site is back up and running. Please oh please update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!
person brainfear
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay. You deserve an applause. This is awesome! More please!
person CSIReader
schedule October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this!!!
This story is gonna give me art art attack, it's so heartbreaking. But that doesn't mean I wn't n't totally revisit this story because I am completely addicted to your writing now.

Won't you give them a happy ending?



person svcmc
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story has been great, I loved reading it. But enough already, let them out of their misery and have him remember!! It's beginning to feel like a drawn out soap opera. They were so awesome together, now they're so miserable!! Please, for the love of God, get them together!! She needs him to get through this pregnancy, don't make her suffer anymore -- life's tough enough!
person Jennifer Paris Morgan
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, PLEASE update...?
person Stephanie
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story! I decided to read this at like eleven-thirty one night, and I got so into it that I stayed up all night to finish iteaseease update SOON!
I can't wait to see whether Grissom will come to or not! AWESOME PLOT! Keep up the GREAT work!
person Maddie
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, we are all dying here waiting for chapter 13!!!! please please please let me know when you've updated. i love this story! definitely one of my favorites!
person Anon
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more!! that´s some cliffhanger.........
person brainfear
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Ch 12 is a doozy! So now he's figures out that they're married. Ha! I'd LOVE to see what happens next!!!!! :o)
person LivnEl
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:eek: Married. I can hardly wait for you to update.