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for Last Chance

by Hazeleyed

person nevillus
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is my first csi fanfic ive read. only one problem i need more chapters. It is really great.
person Nem
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! Your characterisation is wonderful, the plot is exquisitely developed... Your language is perfect... Just one note: there seems to e a problem with some words having been copied and typed over other words. Might think about changing that. Otherwise: a must-read! :)
person brainfear
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! This story gets better and better!
person Moonpattern
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are gonna finish, right, you can't leave us all hanging like that!

This is awesome, continue!
person Sara
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter. Update soon please!
person Rachel
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a really great chapter! Poor Sara....poor Gris...when will the fates be kind? I wonder...is Grissom having some sort of sympathy pregnancy sickness? Maybe this will help him remember. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person sheena
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story are you gonna write more cos i wanna find out if grissom gets his memory back
person Bonnie
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*groans as her head hits the computer desk* I hate works in progress! I wanna know what happens NOW! =D
person LivnEl
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay I just giggled helplessly at that last line. I love it and can't wait for chapter 14.
person djkittycat
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is lovely.

MOre please??