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for Last Chance

by Hazeleyed

person Casandra
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is by far one of the best stories I have read in quite a while. Your style of writing is so unique and just draws you in. I so can not wait until there is an update. Will Sara go to Miami?...arrgghh the suspense is gonna kill me.

Very good work.

Casandra
person Justine
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just had to say, your writing is fantastic! I haven't been into CSI for that long, but you have definitely added fuel to the fire, and now I'm completely hooked. I really like the way you have the right amount of angst to make the situation seem real, but not so much that it gets tedious. Not to mention the insanely hot sex! I also really appreciate that your posts are longer than a lot of other fics I read, which gives the reader more time to really get involved in the story, rather than having everything broken up to the point that the story gets garbled. Keep up the phenomenal work!
Justine
person Jill
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! You are such an amazing writer!! I hope you update soon!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
person fidah
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

It says that the story is TBC. So is that really not the end of it? Love the story~! I was really into it...still am. I think I've read it for about 3-4 times already. Kewl. Hehe

person Casandra
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh that was a good ending for that chappie. Probably not a good idea to call someone you love when your drunk. LOL

Cant wait to read the next chappie.
person Casandra
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil Cliffie!!!! Very nice.
person Adriana
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this- keep updating!
person dew2adidas
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more
person lostinthought
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you!

It was just getting to a good part. my only problem with your story is I can't read it all at once. You're a great writer and I'm always sad to get the end of the chapter. Please update soon the suspense is killing me!!!!!
person Pam
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update!!! Keep them coming!