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Girl, you are a good writer and I hope, sincerely, that you write original fiction also. This was a good read, something that makes you want to keep reading for you must know the outcome.

Hey, this is hot, (even though I don't usually read het) and I wanted to let you know that the ending is fine, good even, imo.

Cobra

How could it have ended better? Hmm,have to give that some thought,I figured climax WAS the destination,not the departure,but who knows? LOL As for rough and testosteron-y,I think that Grissom would be that and all points inbetween.After all,he was man enough to take on Lady Heather,and there was a ball breaker if ever there wae!! e!!
Good story, enjoyed it!

Ooh, that did things to me. I love agres Gri Grissom, and you write him well. Thanks.

I liked that, I see Grissom as very intense as well. I understand your problem with endings. I usually have to be inspired with an ending before I even attempt a fic. Hence the lone two I've written. ;-) But I love your fics.

Hey Anansay!
I liked this story! Short and to the point. Very erotic. I can definitely see Grissom like this. You made him forceful, but of of holding himself in check - I liked that. And like you said, who knows what he'd be like in the bedroom? He seems to be the tender, gentle, reverent type but... his interest in Lady Heather and her "domain" leaves you guessing. He also comes across as a shy, maybe inexperienced guy - but just as easily can be seen as a man who's had his share of ladies and knows how to please them. So I don't think it's OOC at all. Personally, I like a more forceful, confidant, "feral" Grissom! And I'm fairly sure I'm not the only one.
Hopefully constructive criti... ... ('cause I really do like this story :-) ) would be what got Grisso ang angry... you mentioned he was pushed to a point. What pushed him?
Again, I liked this! Writing NC-17 erotica isn't easy - but you sure make it look that way!

A very intenss a.. uhm hot story. I think that this is very much IC. Grissom the "control freak" finally slips and can´t stop :-)

Anansay, as always, awesome. :)