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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good story. I'd be lying if I said that I was happy with the ending. I would have loved it if there was more to this story, but it does make sense to end it where you did.
You really captured both Grissom and Sara. I never have been able to write Grissom real well because I can't relate to him. Very well done!
Casandra
You really captured both Grissom and Sara. I never have been able to write Grissom real well because I can't relate to him. Very well done!
Casandra
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! You absolutely nailed Gissom's character! His 'plan', at the end is just so him! Great job!
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure I wrote feedback on ff.net. Great story! I like the way you showed their fears and emotions and I love the smut scene. :))
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and was sad to see it go from the net.Glad to see its back. Loved the way Gris finally makes up his mind and goes for broke. Liked the 'one day I'll ask you to marry me' Very realistic. Good job.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it on ff.net and it's just as great here. I am so glad we've found a place to post our stories where they won't get booted (and us!).
I like how you take your time in getting them together--very realistic. And the writing, it just brings it all together in a great, can't-put-it-down work.
I like how you take your time in getting them together--very realistic. And the writing, it just brings it all together in a great, can't-put-it-down work.