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for Fucking The Brain Out

by Whiterose555

person Clay20
schedule August 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nice
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good fanfic are u going to make a sequel??
person Killisandra
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, it has real potential but first get a beta reader, you grammar and spelling sucks. You are very sloppy with your sex scenes and you need to work on your description. I expect much better from someone who is mature enough to express mood in their writing. Better Luck Next Time.
person St. Patrick
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! that is all i can say! it's WOW!
person UK
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good you must continue this love fling. Will Prue find out?