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for Christmas Gifts or Blue Seduction

by ladykardasi

person RyuaAlba
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You really do have a lovely gift for writing romantic smut that manages to be both touching and incredibly hot at the same time. Your descriptions are lovely. Something is going wrong with your formatting though, the occasional word or sentence is badly garbled. And no story this beautiful should have such silly little things distracting from it.
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so perfectly lovely and beautiful!!!