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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im dying in suspense here
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I see potential but it's not H.C Andersen or anything...Keep trying!
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
These are paragraphs, not chapters. You've got the plot, but please don't post until you've got some action to give us.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey i luv it plz update the chapter soon thanks great job
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, just not very good. Your explenations leave much to be desired, and the ooc-ness is really quite painful. Work a little harder on it, okay?
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^%* #%^*^%*@%*^%*^# ^*^@%* @%^* #%^*^ @%* ^%*^%! please please please please oh please update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have got to write more i have to know what happens!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wrte longer pages
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, been reading the chapters. Very good start. Fast but not too fast. The spelling is a little b, bu, but doesn't disrupt the flow too much. Miranda's internal dialogue is a little awkward, but still gets the ideas across. The tease of the two girls being so close to being "involved" is SO delicious!! Keep up the yummy work!! 5 stars!!!
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far so good.......... HURRY UP!