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by HoneyKCarpson

person Secret
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! Longer chaps in future plz! When i read chap 4,I was like kick his ass Ryan! I was also like Seth u idoit! Then i rejoiced when he hit Aston (Haha Aston u got your ass semi-kicked!) In future when u do or if u do a sex part put LOTS AND LOTS of detail! We readers LUV that! UPDATE SOON! C WAI WAIT FOR MORE!
Yours Truley and FOREVER!
SECRET! Lolz
person lemony
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD! EXCELLENT! deffinitly reccomended the only thing is that i hope i get too read anoter one linked to these four chapters!! :D:D:D
person Nemesis27
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please write more! This is so hot!
person Nemesis27
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yummy indeed. Loved it. Now how about some Ryan/Seth action. Pretty please?
person spirit
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh lord don't stop there!!! you're just getting to the good stuff!!!!
person Erik
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really loved the o.c. fics, keep em coming
person Anon
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ummm - that was good, than you! keep writing please!
person Anon
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so far I am enjoying very much .. waiting breathlessly for an update :)
person buzzerd
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep writing!! i like how the story is going! please update soon. :)
person Kashshaptu
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! i like it! please update soon^_^ can't wait to see what happens^_^