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by HoneyKCarpson

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lordy, Lordy!!! That was among the hottest of all fiction stories I have read!

I think you have s erious obligation to your readers to actually make this an uberly long story, with much well-written fucking!!!

Thanks!
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! That's so sweet. Especially where Ryan was all possesive.
person dark angel
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you've so got to post back soon it wouldn't be fair if you didn't please post the next chaptr soon there so cool hehehehe
person Anonymous
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh! very good! i like it a lot! please keep writing! now that Seth and Ryan know how they both feel i really want to see what happens next!
person science rocks
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well ya, this storry is a tottally coll and a hop that you wil updat sonn, will ya???
becase i´m wating for it and i hopp that you will updat sonn, thankkss, seee yaa. hey areee you americaaan becase i´m from russia and i´m coll, my englis is godd, ne???
see yaaa bueeee ;P
person Erin
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are there gonna be more chapters for this??? I hope so!!! Pretty please..... x
person dark vampire
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeep! so good! please write more soon!! yummy!!! i love you! *kisses* thank yoou thank you thank you! *huggles*
person beloved
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really amused me - specially that last line - i could totally see ryan saying that!
person YD
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ryan...Seth X_X*nose bleed* More. NOW!
person akitso
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!! plz write more, i wanna know what happens next
PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!