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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was highly enjoyable. I liked all three chapters, but the second was my favourite. As enjoyable as the sex scenes were, I have to admit my very favourite part was the end of that chapter, "She smiled. He fainted." It just ended it so beautifully.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Any chance of any more??
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Any chance of any more??
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good work. The writting is technically sound --- that is rare. (Not that I'm perfect by any stretch of the imagaination). You could use some embelisshments, help the reader feel what is going on as well as see. I liked the take on Riker's sexuality. I LOVE the stride purposefully thing...that is so true! Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*
Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good work again. And, again --- (abeinbeing redundant?) your work is technically sound unlike my review. Sigh. This one felt a bit forced. It is a nice little fic, but again you can use some embelissing. I enjoyed reading it and I look forward to more of your work.
Keep up the good work,
Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*
P.S. -- Come one people, let's write some reviews. They don't take much time. How can we expect to improve our writting and thus our enterianment if we don't provide feedback?
Keep up the good work,
Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*
P.S. -- Come one people, let's write some reviews. They don't take much time. How can we expect to improve our writting and thus our enterianment if we don't provide feedback?