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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much. Now I have to gouge my eyes out. What the hell was that?
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ignore the other reviews, you are fucking brilliant. you should be earning money with this stuff.
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March 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, it was definitely a porn without plot! I agree with what other have said - very out of character, you could have had any two people. Your writing is very good but, personally, I prefer more romantic fics, and don't really enjoy vulgar ones like this. However, I'm sure people who need an overdose of hardcore fiction will enjoy it. It just wasn't for me ^^
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March 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
gah
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March 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I agree completely. The characterization wasn't there at all, not one bit. They were so wooden and alien -- who were those people? They even had really brittle unimaginative dialogue it wasn't realistic at all. Sorry.
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February 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As flat-out PWP, it fit the bill. As an X-Files story, it failed completely. The charrizarization was horrid. I'm sure you know that, but most of the reason most people read fanfic is to see the characters they know from the show. And those characters are not present in your story. They might as well have been named Tom and Sheila because they were NOT Mulder and Scully. What you have here is masturbation material, not a good X-Files story.